"live now in bliss, and live out your story,
the best that you can be"
The first runthrough of those lyrics was powerful, my favourite part of the song, just the way it flowed through "live out your story" brought up some pretty compelling emotions just on that part alone. i took off half a star because there were parts i wish were more vocally confident, in the part i quoted the way you sang "story" flowed better than the sequential times you sang that one particular lyric, the first time around i could feel that perfect follow through where as the times after there was wavering which didn't sound as strong to me. That was just a personal gripe though, the song was still great.